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So pretty and deliciously heartbreaking. ;A;

I demand you make a coloring tutorial, darling! ;_;

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The coloring is beautiful! And for some reason I adore the buckles on Yoite's coat. I just feel bad for poor Miharu, barefoot in the snow. *lol* ^__~

Walking in snow barefoot doesn't feel nice. Poor Miharu ;___;
I love the look on Yoite's face ♥ And the coloring is beautiful once again <3 *hug*

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Hope you don't mind just a little critique on anatomy? I'm just saying this because I expect you'd want to know - I certainly do...

It appears there are some issues with the legs and feet on both characters. Miharu especially appears to have his right foot on his left leg... the toe closest to the "camera" looks like a big toe to me, unless he is drastically pigeon-toed - and even then it would be a bit overdone. It's a beautiful little bare foot - it just seems like it's on the wrong leg.

Also, Koite's legs seem a little off and I think it's mainly because there is no foot showing on the leg (right leg?) that disappears behind Miharu. There should be a foot there, pushing off the ground, to show that Koite is definitely turning and walking away from Miharu. Otherwise the position is a little distracting because it doesn't look like it was intentional.

Nitpicking aside, yes it is quite lovely in coloring. You're doing a great job with digital art! Keep up the terrific work!

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Thank you so much! Y-yeah... I realized that I'd messed up Miharu and Yoite's feet when I put this up last night. *FAILSAUCE FOREVER* I-I need to stop drawing things at 4 in the morning. *melts into a puddle of shame* Since I drew the lineart in pencil, I considered scanning it on again after editing it, but then realized it wouldn't fit with the color layers I already had. *shall make use of Photoshop's line tool, instead* I will definitely edit those things as soon as I get home from work today!

A-and...! *flail* Thank you so much for commenting! I'm honored! I appreciate it so much that you took the time to write such a wonderful, constructive comment!

(XD You are familiar with Nabari? :3)

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Aa~! this is pretty(_{...a bit sad, but pretty}) and I really like how you colored their hair a-and Yoite's coat. *w* I can't think of anything to critique that hasn't been mentioned already; just keep at it!

Thank you so much!

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They have a bit big heads but everything else s perfect in my view. ^^ And the coloring is beautiful. I wish I could color like that. :<

Ahh the sweet angst!

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